Crying Over You
Forever you promised,
Forever a lie,
You promised the Moon,
And the stars in the sky.
You’d stolen my heart,
Then left me alone,
You were so cold,
It chilled to the bone.
You left me with nothing,
But tears and a past,
When you said “I love you”,
I thought it would last.
But “I love you” found an ending,
The “us” and “we” no more,
You said you didn’t mean to,
But you hurt me to the core.
So I guess that I’m the loser,
Cause you’ve found
Someone new.
But I’m still here,
Still all alone,
Just crying over you.
Author: Brittany Douglas.
heey, i was looking at this and was wondering if I give you credit could i use this part in my chorus of my song:
“Forever you promised,
Forever a lie,
You promised the Moon,
And the stars in the sky.
You’d stolen my heart,
Then left me alone,
You were so cold,
It chilled to the bone.
You left me with nothing,
But tears and a past,
When you said “I love you”,
I thought it would last.
But “I love you” found an ending”
i would be greatly appreciated if i could
this poem is amazing,
and it sums up my feelings so well,
its so close to my relationship that when i read it, it sent chills down my spine, thank you
This poem is so good it really reminds of my old relationship of so many unbroken promises
this so so great im speechles
It speaks all my heart content. Sad but it’s the truth …
Thank you all for such nice comments!